Reader Response Draft 1
The powerful bandit against internet freedom – should we stop him?
Morozov (2015) tells us “But
it’s hardly a global defeat for Google: the company is still expanding
elsewhere…” in the article “Who the true enemy of the internet freedom- China,
Russia or the U.S?” I read the first few paragraphs of the article. And my
desire to work in the Google in America intensified despite the author hinting
me, through the title, that the U.S might be doing something unacceptable. It
is my goal to contend myself one day, telling that I have also contributed to
the “ever-growing” Google. However Morozov has changed my perspective about my
career.
Morozov
asserts in his article that though Russia and China restrict internet freedom
to maintain their technological sovereignty on their land, it is the U.S that
exploits internet freedom to assert its digital sovereignty globally. Not just
Russia and China, but other countries like Brazil also take actions to reduce
their dependence on American-run communication services. And Morozov points out
that these actions are condemned by the U.S. It is reported in the article that
the U.S have great interest in the information that are serviced by their
companies but stored elsewhere. Finally the author concludes that countries are
imposing stricter internet censorship and control over their citizens’ data not
just in response to domestic tension, but concerning the growing technological
supremacy of the U.S. I strongly agree with the author’s assertion. However I
would go further by adding that the expansion of U.S technological sovereignty
globally, using powerful strategies has to be restricted; before it becomes very
hard for other nations to undo it.
As
stated in the report “Privacy and Human Rights”, written by Privacy International
(n.d), Universal Declaration, 1948, specifically protected territorial and
communications privacy. Now the rules should be much stricter. But on the other
hand, the retrieval of personal data by the U.S seems to increase and happen
globally. This is supported by Morozov, in his article, who briefly narrates
the disagreement between the U.S government and Microsoft regarding gaining
access to data stored by the Microsoft in Ireland. Infringing anyone’s privacy
is wrong. If it is legalised for the governments to do so, it should be only
that of their citizens’
I
support the fact that it is fine for other nations to react against the U.S’
increasing control in the communication sector, though it is a stab on internet
freedom . The U.S has already developed huge companies like the Microsoft and
the Google. As what Morosoz has stated in his article, it is also hard to
replace such services easily by other countries. Other nations need time to
form their own “Google” or “Microsoft”. In the meanwhile, the nations can
increase internet censorship and control their citizens’ data inland, as to
restrict the expanding technological supremacy of the U.S.
I
fear that the U.S will be able to use its rising power in the communication sector
to interfere or influence the politics of other countries. We all know that the
internet play an important role in politics. It helps politicians to mobilise
supports, increase their popularity, convey important messages to the people
and etc. Just like how a nation can determine what information its citizen have
access to on the internet, the U.S might be able to do it border-less with its
growing power. If the U.S easily gains access to the data, serviced by its
company elsewhere, today, it might be able to even alter the data without
anyone’s acknowledgement in the future.
Returning
back to my plans about my career, how was it changed after reading Morozov’s
article? I have not changed my decision to go to the U.S to work. I believe
that I can learn a lot from such a country which is victorious in establishing
its highly futile services everywhere. However I will return back to my
homeland to help it uphold its technological supremacy inland.
(659
words)
Reference:
Morozov,
P. (2015, January 4). Who’s the true enemy of the internet freedom – China,
Russia, or the U.S? The Guardian Retrieved
from
Privacy International. (n.d) Privacy and human rights.
Retrieved from http://gilc.org/privacy/survey/intro.html
Hi Pryanga,
ReplyDeleteThere are good quotes to support your facts. Clear use of language.
However, there are some points that you can improve on:
- Structure of the essay can be clearer.
- The thesis statement can be better defined.
- Language can be more formal.